Monday, November 3, 2025

11 November 2025 - Choices


"For any given idea, there exists a variety of technically and grammatically correct word combinations that can be used to communicate it. But each word combination alters the idea. It is the form the writer chooses, the words he picks out, that determines the content of his work, what he really says, and whether or not the writing works . . . Writing that works is also writing that assigns a job to every word in a sentence. Every word, every sentence, every paragraph must be doing some work or it should be fired." — Gary Provost -  MAKING YOUR WORDS WORK


I chose this long quote because it's important to pay attention to every word written. 

What a lot of writers don't realize is that every word has a precise meaning or imagery, or both. For example, hate is not the same thing as ire. Rage is not the same as pique. Boiling isn't the same thing as tepid.

In other words, there are many shades of meaning in-between.

When drafting a work, it's common to grab the first words that come to mind. In the revision phase, individual words should be scrutinized and more vivid or correct words swapped in.

No doubt about it—creating a story well written and well told depends on word choices. So, strive to get the words right. Your reader will appreciate it.

Have a Happy Thanksgiving.

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1 comment:

Janet said...

Great advice, Catherine.